This had a lot of potential. I like a lot of the concepts and there should be more chef romances. But it was really lacking. I’m going to be as positive as I can, because I’m sure someone will love this.
Let’s start with the characters. Lumi and Julien could be compelling, but come across as shells. Julien is especially underdeveloped. There were attempts at backstory, but not fully realized. Lumi felt the most real when she was cooking. They were also pretty bland.
The romance. There was no chemistry or attraction between them. I have no idea why these two fell in love other than they were supposed to for the plot. That doesn’t create a romance.
I think part of the problem with the romance comes from the pacing. I was constantly confused about how much time had passed. And sometimes it was written like months had passed which I’m supposed to interpret as time for character development, but it was like one day. I swear there were continuity issues, but don’t have the desire to re-read to confirm.
There’s also a magical realism part of this story. Or at least that’s what I’m going to call it. Now, I don’t read a lot of magical realism so maybe there are genre norms I’m unaware of. It felt forced. It was an interesting concept, but I don’t understand Lumi’s “gift”. It seemed like a convenient plot point for drama, but, like the characters, was poorly developed.
Thanks for reading!
Holly