I don’t know what to say.
I like the idea of this story and these characters. but it all fell flat. I also didn’t buy a lot of things. I kept feeling like I skipped pages somehow because character behavior just didn’t make sense. Like Avalon and Devan don’t get along. But why? And he starts to like her. But why?
The Thane/Devan relationship was good, but wasn’t as well developed as it could’ve been. Thane’s whole developed as it could’ve been. Thane’s whole character and existence was a little plot moppety. And that’s one of the reasons I typically avoid kids in books.
In the end, I was just disappointed by this. I’m sure some people would like this, but not me.
Thanks for reading!
Holly