I figured I would like this, but I didn’t expect to be as intrigued as I was. I read it in a couple sessions. It probably would’ve been only one, but I had to go to sleep eventually. If I still gave out half stars this would be 4.5.
So normally, I’m not a big fan of portal fantasy. It’s because I don’t like how people seem to just forget their previous life. Ms. Kemmerer specifically goes against that. And I got the most emotional when Harper was sad about her mom and brother. Plus, there were stakes there: should she stay or return home, etc.?
Harper, Rhen, and Grey were all great characters. Harper has CP, but it doesn’t define her. And she really comes into her own in Emberfell. She learns how to be a strong independent person. Rhen is damaged, but really cares about his people. Grey was equally developed even though he doesn’t have a POV. His character was explored well through his actions and interactions with Rhen and Harper.
While I like all the characters, there wasn’t a particularly distinctive voice for Rhen and Harper. If you’re writing in a POV it should be unique-alternatively you could write in 3rd person.
The romance was well-done. It was paced perfectly-not too drawn out or too slow. And it was only one aspect of this story.
I ended falling in love with this world and the characters. I’m definitely eager to read more and I need to know what happens to Emberfell.
Thanks for reading!
Holly