I really wanted to like this. I was trying to convince myself that I was into it, but it just wasn’t working.
So, I had a few main issues. First, the romance. We were told these people (Garrett & Julia) were falling in love, but I didn’t see it. And why are they falling in love? They seem like nice people, but do they have any real conversations? There was a lot of telling and not showing. I always hear about that and rarely see it in a book-at least where I’m bothered.
In general, I felt like pages were missing. Scenes didn’t flow as well as they could have. Especially for plot points-things would just happen. Like why? There were some super obvious continuity errors, too. I read an ARC so maybe that will change.
I gave Amelia Grey another chance. I’m sure some people love her. I’m happy for them, but she isn’t the author for me.
Thanks for reading!
Holly